作业帮英语自我介绍,帮我看看何不合适,还有哪些语法错误,连贯性咋滴,顺便帮我改改哦,先拜个谢咯
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英语自我介绍,帮我看看何不合适,还有哪些语法错误,连贯性咋滴,顺便帮我改改哦,先拜个谢咯
Good morning ,boys and girls,I am glad to stand here to introduce myself.
Firstly,my name is xiao jiahui ,i am a freshman in the college and studying in the Guangdong Youth Career Academy .by the way ,there are 5 people in my family ,Both my father and my mother are farmers ,and i am the youngest one in my family.secondly,in my space time ,i like to read novels,i think reading could tranquilize and enlighten the mind as well as make me forget some unhappy things and troubles,in addition to reading,i also like to read comics and watch cartoons,such as naruto,one piece ,bleach and fairy tail.however, a lot of grownups think watching cartoons is childish in china ,but i don't think so.
because i awalys get some spiritual power from comics and sometimes was deeply moved by their pure friendship .third, i have a dream ,i wish there is no poor people in the world
and no hate among people.As The Final Speech of “the Great Dictator”said,
We all want to help one another. Human beings are like that. We want to live by each other's happiness - not by each other's misery. We don't want to hate and despise one another. In this world there's room for everyone and the good earth is rich and can provide for everyone.
Good morning ,boys and girls,I am glad to stand here to introduce myself.
Firstly,my name is xiao jiahui ,i am a freshman in the college and studying in the Guangdong Youth Career Academy .by the way ,there are 5 people in my family ,Both my father and my mother are farmers ,and i am the youngest one in my family.secondly,in my space time ,i like to read novels,i think reading could tranquilize and enlighten the mind as well as make me forget some unhappy things and troubles,in addition to reading,i also like to read comics and watch cartoons,such as naruto,one piece ,bleach and fairy tail.however, a lot of grownups think watching cartoons is childish in china ,but i don't think so.
because i awalys get some spiritual power from comics and sometimes was deeply moved by their pure friendship .third, i have a dream ,i wish there is no poor people in the world
and no hate among people.As The Final Speech of “the Great Dictator”said,
We all want to help one another. Human beings are like that. We want to live by each other's happiness - not by each other's misery. We don't want to hate and despise one another. In this world there's room for everyone and the good earth is rich and can provide for everyone.
Good morning ,boys and girls,
当你是长辈的时候用boys和girls,如果是同辈的话最好还是everyone
.by the way ,there are 5 people in my family ,Both my father and my mother are farmers ,
my father and my mother 改 my parent
secondly,in my space time ,i like to read novels,
改 I like reading novels when I am free.like to do想要做某事,like doing 习惯做某事
i think reading could tranquilize and enlighten the mind as well as make me forget some unhappy things and troubles,
make- makes
in addition to reading,i also like to read comics and watch cartoons,such as naruto,one piece ,bleach and fairy tail.
如果你是想表达除了读书,不要用in addtion to 用besides
.third,i have a dream ,i wish there is no poor people in the world
and no hate among people.
此句太繁琐,改成.I wish there are no poverty and hatred in the world.
当你是长辈的时候用boys和girls,如果是同辈的话最好还是everyone
.by the way ,there are 5 people in my family ,Both my father and my mother are farmers ,
my father and my mother 改 my parent
secondly,in my space time ,i like to read novels,
改 I like reading novels when I am free.like to do想要做某事,like doing 习惯做某事
i think reading could tranquilize and enlighten the mind as well as make me forget some unhappy things and troubles,
make- makes
in addition to reading,i also like to read comics and watch cartoons,such as naruto,one piece ,bleach and fairy tail.
如果你是想表达除了读书,不要用in addtion to 用besides
.third,i have a dream ,i wish there is no poor people in the world
and no hate among people.
此句太繁琐,改成.I wish there are no poverty and hatred in the world.