求 英语作文 改错 别人的作文 错很多 但是我也不会改 哪位哥哥姐姐给看看

求 英语作文 改错 别人的作文 错很多 但是我也不会改 哪位哥哥姐姐给看看
This was a holiday,Luck Hu just finished him high school lesson.He wanted to get a driver’s license on the holiday.He came a driver’s school,he wanted to ask some question for license.Recoba Wang is the school account service officer,he was received Luck.“Hello,Mr.Luck,how are you?I am Recoba,I am very happy to help you.” “Hi,I am Luck,I want to get a driver’s license,but I don’t know what do I need?” “Okay,you had to give me your ID and visual proof” “Oh,I take it.” “What kind of license do you want?” “C1.” “C1?Okay,I must tell you,if you get C1,you only can drive car or some SUV,you can’t drive truck or above five seats’ car!” “I know this,this OK.” “Okay,now,the first you had to fill in an application form,next,I will help you order time for the rules of the road test.If you pass this test,I will help you order coach.After you study eighty hours by car on training ground,you need pass three tests.If you pass,you need continue study by car on road.After twenty hours,you will join finally test by car.If you pass,I will help apply for driver’s license.” “Okay,how many do I need pay it?” “About 3800 RMB,if you pass every test in first time,you will not need pay it more.” “Okay,can I pay it by access card?” “Oh,I am sorry,only VISA.” “No problem.” “Okay,I will call you after one week.” “Thanks a lot.” “You are welcome.”

It was a vacation and Luck Hu had just finished his high school.He wanted to get a driving license during the vacation.So he went to a driving school and wanted to ask some questions for the license.Recoba Wang was a staff of the driving school,he welcomed Luck.“Hello,Mr.Luck,how are you?I am Recoba and I am very happy to help you.” “Hi,I am Luck,I want to get a driving license,but I don’t know how to do it.” “Okay,you have to give me your ID and visual proof” “Oh,here you are.” “What kind of license do you want?” “C1.” “C1?Okay,I must tell you,if you get C1,you can only drive cars or some SUV,you can’t drive trucks or big cars with more than five seats!” “I know this.It is OK.” “Okay,now,firstly you have to fill in an application form.And next,I will help you order time for the test of the traffic regulations.If you pass this test,I will help you reserve a coach.After learning to drive a car for eighty hours in school,you need to pass three tests.If you pass them,you will continue to study by car on road.After twenty hours,you will get final test by car.If you pass it,I will help you apply for a driving license.” “Okay,how much do I need pay it?” “About 3800 RMB,if you pass each test during the first time,you needn't to pay more.” “Okay,can I pay it by access card?” “Oh,I am sorry,only cash.” “No problem.” “Okay,I will call you in one week.” “Thanks a lot.” “You are welcome.”
好多地方语义不合适,不得不改动得比较大……