广场舞给人们带来了快乐和烦恼,提出自己的见解（求英语作文）

广场舞给人们带来了快乐和烦恼,提出自己的见解（求英语作文）

We can see lots ladies dancing in the square or open spaces after dinner time. It was a very harmonious scene not until someone fire guns and release his dogs to threaten these ladies to escape, just because their music is too loud. Some people think this lousy music has seriously affecting their life, so that the dancing lady should be expelled from public place. While I can’t agree with them.
在晚饭之后我们能看到很多大妈在广场或者空地跳舞.这是个非常和谐的画面,直到有人明枪放狗威胁她们逃走,就单单因为她们的音乐太大声.有些人这吵闹的音乐严重地影响了他们的生活,所以该把这群大妈驱逐出公共地方.我无法认同这种说法.
I have two reasons to support my views. In the first place, most dancing ladies are retired woman, they finally have extra time to do something they like to do, and get together to dance, making more new friends who are share the same habit with them, and build up their body as well. As a matter of fact, some dancing lady is a loner with on family member at home, dancing group is like their second home. We should not deprive them of dance right.
我有两个观点来支持我的观点.第一,很多跳舞大妈都是退休女士,她们最终有多余的时间来做她们爱做的事情,聚在一起跳跳舞,交一些有共同爱好的新朋友,同时锻炼锻炼身体.事实上,有些跳舞大妈是孤家寡人,舞团就像她们的第二个家.我们不能这么剥夺她们跳舞的权利.
In the second place, square and open space is public place; everyone can use it for any actions of entertainment or relax. If someone complain the lousy music, they can go straight to the dance group and ask them to turn it down. We don’t have to solve this problem by an extremely way.
第二,广场和空地都是公众地方,每个人都能用来进行任何的娱乐活动和放松.如果有人抱怨音乐太吵,那么他们可以直接地跟舞团的人说,让她们关小声点.我们可以不用这么极端的方法去解决问题的.
As a consequence, we cannot expel the dancing lady, because it is a public place, and why can’t we show some mercy to a group of retired lady who are just need a place to dance together?
总之,我们不能这么驱逐跳舞大妈,因为这是公众地方,还有为什么我们不能对这群只是想找个地方一起好好跳个舞的退休女士们好点呢?