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麻烦修改下作文
Recently,our city is developing three creative activities,to create civilized city should start from me,from small start,as middle school students,we should be how to improve our image of the city?
I think we can do this:first of all to be polite,no spitting,no littering rubbish,protect side environment; Because life is very important so we will abide by the traffic rules,and to keep public order,do a civilized men; Second,we should learn knowledge,especially English,so can volunteer,make the tourists from all over the world come to us here to feel more at home.
The classmates,come on!Believe in our actions our city will be more beautiful!
Recently our city is developing three creative activities.To create a better city,everybody should try his best to help.As middle school students,we should know how to make our city better.First of all,we all should be polite.We should offer our help whenever possible.We mustn't spit or litter.We should all try to protect the environment instead of polluting it.Life is very important,so we should also abide by the traffic rules.Secondly,we should try to improve our English,especially spoken English,so that we can help those foreign tourists from all over the world and make them at home.
I believe if everyone tries his best to be a good host,we will have a better city and a better life as well.
首先能写那么多,非常不容易,也把想要表达的意思表达出来了.给几个小建议:
1.先把框架搭好,如果有问题提示,就按提示的顺序写.通常是:what----why-----how
2.一般是三段式,开头点题,主体段,和结尾再点题.每谈一个小点,最好用一到两句话进行拓展说明,各个小点之间注意用连词连接.
3.多练习,多看看好的文章,一定会有明显进步的.加油!
Good luck!