希望各位高手能帮我找出我翻译的错误,或者改些较好或高级语句

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希望各位高手能帮我找出我翻译的错误,或者改些较好或高级语句
在早上很早的时候,我的室友怀疑他的手机被偷了,突然大叫起来：“我的手机呢”.我被吓醒了.我本来也认为他的手机真的被偷了因为我好像记得昨晚当我在睡觉的时候有个我以为是贼的人碰到过我.但事实并不是我们想的那样,实际上他的手机是掉在地上散成几部分了.哈哈,可能我昨晚产生错觉.今天我一整天在宿舍.我今天对自己很满易由于我今天很少玩电脑还有大部分时间用来学习.我希望我能继续坚持.
In early morning ,my roommate suspect that his mobile was stolen and shout suddenly:where is my mobile?,which make me frighten up.Originally,I believed that his mobile was really stolen because I remembered that someone ,who I thought that he was a thief in the morning,touched when I was sleeping yesterday night.But the truth isn't what we thought.Actually,his mobile fell down on the floor and divided into several parts,haha,maybe I had a mistaken impression
yesterday night.Today,I stayed at my dormitory
all day.I satisfied with myself since I seldom played computer and study in most of time today.I hope I can continue insisting on it.
因为我好像记得昨晚当我在睡觉的时候有个我以为是贼的人碰到过我.这句该怎样翻译好?

Early this morning, my roommate was suspicious that his cell phone had been stolen. He shouted suddenly, "Where is my cell phone?"I was awoken by him. I had believed his cell phone did have been stolen because I seemed to remember someone who might be a thief touched me while I was sleeping. It didn't turn out to be true as a matter of fact. Actually, his cell phone dropped to the ground and broken into several pieces. Haha, It might be the illusion I had last night. I spent the whole day in my dorm today. I'm satisfied with myself because I didn't play computer a lot today, so I could spend most of my time studying. I hope I can go on like that.

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