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可不可以帮我改一下这篇英语作文,帮我加上一些好的句子和内容,最后结尾
An Enjoyable Trip
Last year, I went to England with my family. I had wonderful trip.
On the first day, we went to London, the capital of England.
We visited some attractions such as Buckingham palace, Big Ben and British Museum.
When we entered the Buckingham palace hall, we were surprised. Because it was wonderful.
Big Ben was the biggest clock in the England, also it was the symbols of London.
British Museum is one of the most famous museum in the world. It collected the precious collection from different countries.
In visiting the British museum, I learned England’s history and culture.
On the next day, we went to oxford street, it was the London shopping centre. It had lots of famous brand and it can let you enjoyed advanced service. I bought some souvenirs to my friends.
In the afternoon, we tried different British food such as English fish chip, roasted beef and Yorkshire pudding.
If I had a chance, I would like to go there again.
An Enjoyable Trip
Last year, I went to England with my family. I had wonderful trip.
On the first day, we went to London, the capital of England.
We visited some attractions such as Buckingham palace, Big Ben and British Museum.
When we entered the Buckingham palace hall, we were surprised. Because it was wonderful.
Big Ben was the biggest clock in the England, also it was the symbols of London.
British Museum is one of the most famous museum in the world. It collected the precious collection from different countries.
In visiting the British museum, I learned England’s history and culture.
On the next day, we went to oxford street, it was the London shopping centre. It had lots of famous brand and it can let you enjoyed advanced service. I bought some souvenirs to my friends.
In the afternoon, we tried different British food such as English fish chip, roasted beef and Yorkshire pudding.
If I had a chance, I would like to go there again.
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