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你的笔友听说对你的峨眉上一游非常的感兴趣,请你为你的笔友Ruth介绍一下。 包括以下内容:1,July 20th前往的 2,找了许多照片,爬上累了以后想在一块石头上休息,却被一群猴子包围。 3,向猴子扔了面包和糖果,在猴子们吃东西的时候才得以脱身。 开头为:I‘m glad to hear that you are interested in my trip to Mount Emei. Let me tell you all about it . 结尾为:I had an unforgettable trip and I’ll never forget those lovely monkeys. 正文: I‘m glad to hear that you are interested in my trip to Mount Emei. Let me tell you all about it . I went to Mount Emei on July 20th. I climbed Mount Emei and enjoyed the beautiful scene of it. I also took many photos to remember this trip . When tired climbing the mountain , I wanted to sit on the stone to have a rest . At that time , I was surrounded by the monkeys . I was very surprised and didn’t know what to do . Suddenly I thought of that I had some bread and sweets , so I threw them to the monkeys . All of them picked up the food to eat . I ran away when they were eating the food . I had an unforgettable trip and I’ll never forget those lovely monkeys.
解题思路: 内容要点表达全面,能够准确的运用一些典型的短语和句型,句子结构正确,单词书写准确,简单句和并列句的并用增强了文章的色彩和档次。写的非常不错,如果满分30分,我认为能得28分左右。继续努力。
解题过程:
I‘m (I'm) glad to hear that you are interested in my trip to Mount Emei. Let me tell you all about it . I went to Mount Emei on July 20th. I climbed Mount Emei and enjoyed the beautiful scene of it (去掉). I also took many photos to remember this trip . When tired climbing the mountain ,( When I was tired to climb the mountain ,) I wanted to sit on the stone to have a rest . At that time , I was surrounded by the monkeys . I was very surprised and didn’t know what to do . Suddenly I thought of that I had some bread and sweets , so I threw them to the monkeys . All of them picked up the food to eat . I ran away when they were eating the food .
I had an unforgettable trip and I’ll never forget those lovely monkeys.
祝你的英语成绩越来越棒!加油!
最终答案:略