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最近写了一篇英语作文 知道有很多错误的地方但是不知道错在哪里

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最近写了一篇英语作文 知道有很多错误的地方但是不知道错在哪里
Handan impression
two months ago,I frist came here.the sky very gloomy,the weather is colder than my hometown.In went to school the way,I saw all kinds of flowers in the street,they are so dim that those flowers have dust,handan air is very bad.
One month ago,I first came dragon lake park.that day,I was alone in the park from morning until night,about at 7:000pm,taps began to spray,and neons began flicker.the scenery so beautiful.I am lucky I didn't miss it.
Next day I came to congtai park,I saw the congtai very high,there are many decorate on the building.it gave me feeling is old.
In general,handan is a good city.
百度翻译的,你自己看看吧.
邯郸印象
两个月前,我第一次来到这里.天空很阴暗,寒冷的天气比我的家乡.在去学校的路上,我在街上看到各种各样的花,它们是那么的暗淡,那些花有灰尘,邯郸的空气很不好.
一个月前,我来到九龙湖park.that第一,我独自在公园里从早上到晚上,在7:000pm,水龙头开始喷射,和霓虹灯开始flicker.the风景很漂亮.我很幸运,我没有错过它.
第二天,我来到了丛台公园,我看到了丛台很高,有许多装饰在它给我的感觉是老.
总的来说,邯郸是个好城市.