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nowadays,among the college students ,being a tutor has becom

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nowadays,among the college students ,being a tutor has become very "in".More and more college students choose to be a tutor which they can be qualified after class.However,is it really good for college students?
some people hold the view that there are advantages for college students to be tutors.To start with,it can offer a good chance to know more about the society outside college.What is more,being a tutor can not only find an effective way to teach others,but also develop ability of doing work.It is good for future careers.Last but not least,it can relieve,to some extent,the financial burdens of their parents.
while other people think that being a tutor has its'disadvantages.First,being a tutor will spend so much time that reduce their time for rest.Besides,it may consumes a lot of energy and affect their studies.As a result,they may fall behind or fail in their studies.
As far as i am concerned,as a proverb says,"every coin has its' two sides."being a tutor has advantage and disadvantage,college student must keep a good balance between being a student and being a tutor.Otherwise,bing a tutor is not a good choice.
首先我不知道你说的是大学还是大专,外国大学用university student,或者简写uni student
become very "in"?
it can offer --- it's 不是说有什么错,只是习惯用法
What is more --- what's more
Last but not least ---- finally 感觉那个很奇怪
being a tutor will spend so much time that reduce their time for rest
改为 being a tutor will take up a lot of their spare time so they won't have enough time to rest.这是根据你的大概意思翻译过来的原句spend的用法错误
it may consumes a lot of energy and affect their studies.
改为 it may take lots of energy and eventually affect their study.
(因为consume多指消耗热量,能量之类的,指食物方面偏多)
fail in their studies ---- fail their exams
being a tutor has advantages and disadvantages.
must keep a good balance---- find a good balance
最后建议你把being a tutor换几种用法在不同的地方,可以替换的像teaching others,tutoring others,working as a tutor,之类的,总之尽量减少重复