作业帮书面表达（满分25分）我只得了17分，请老师帮忙，谢谢！
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书面表达（满分25分） 假如你叫李明，你有一位英国网友名叫Tom，他听说过中国的故宫，但知之不多，于是给你发了一封e-mail，请你向他介绍一下有关故宫的情况。 请你根据下面的提示给他回一封100字左右的e-mail： 1、故宫（the Palace of Museum）又叫紫禁城（the Forbidden City）。它于1407年开始修建，20万人花了14年的时间，于1420年建成。 2、它所有的宫殿一共有9，999间房间，在中国，9这个数字传统地被认为是吉祥的。 3、现在，每周星期二，故宫免费向中国学生开放。 4、故宫珍藏着中国历史上5，000多年的珍宝（precious treasure）。请他亲自来看一看。 Dear Tom, How are you? I`ll give you some information about the Palace of Museum.The Palace of Museum,or the Forbidden City,started building in 1407.There were 200.000 people spending 14 years building it.In 1420,it was seted up.There are 9,999 rooms in the Palace of Museum.In China,"nine" is a good number.Now,the Palace of Museum is free to the Chinese middle school students on Tuesday.There are many precious treasures in Chinese history.They are very old and special.Welcome to the Palace of Museum.I`ll glod to be your guide! Yours, LiMing 我的这个短文只得了17分，请老师给我指点一下。为什么会这么低呀？谢谢！
解题思路： 希望在以后的学习过程中多注意总结一些好的英语句型,另外对于新学到的单词或者短语要尝试着用他们去造句,这样一来既记住了单词也能锻炼自己的写作能力.
解题过程：
Dear Tom,
How are you?
I`ll give you some information about the Palace of Museum.The Palace of Museum,or the Forbidden City,started building in 1407.There were (去掉THERE WERE)200.000 people spending(SPENT) 14 years building it.In 1420,it was seted(SET) up.There are 9,999 rooms in the Palace of Museum.In China,"nine" is a good(LUCKY) number.Now,the Palace of Museum is (OPEN) to the Chinese middle school students on Tuesday(加FOR FREE).There are many(改MANY为5000) precious treasures in Chinese history.(整句修改为:There are 5000 pecious historical treasres which were stored in the Palace of Museum)They are very old and special.Welcome to the Palace of Museum.I`ll(^be) glod(glad) to be your guide!
Yours,
LiMing
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear Tom,
How are you?
I`ll give you some information about the Palace of Museum.The Palace of Museum,or the Forbidden City,started building in 1407.There were (去掉THERE WERE)200.000 people spending(SPENT) 14 years building it.In 1420,it was seted(SET) up.There are 9,999 rooms in the Palace of Museum.In China,"nine" is a good(LUCKY) number.Now,the Palace of Museum is (OPEN) to the Chinese middle school students on Tuesday(加FOR FREE).There are many(改MANY为5000) precious treasures in Chinese history.(整句修改为:There are 5000 pecious historical treasres which were stored in the Palace of Museum)They are very old and special.Welcome to the Palace of Museum.I`ll(^be) glod(glad) to be your guide!
Yours,
LiMing
最终答案：略