作业帮请问一下我这段英文自我介绍有木有语法错误
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请问一下我这段英文自我介绍有木有语法错误
自己和妈妈写的,希望真正懂英语的帮我看一下...,hello everybody,my name is XXX,i am eleven years old.i like drawing and reading just as sugar free american coffee ,i'm a no dirt vibrant junior middle school students i believe that"knowledge is power".this is my motto my mother is a teacher and my father is a policeman.i have a lovely brother,he is only five years old i hope in the junior high school life,i can learn more knowledge thank.
中文意思：我的名字是XXX，我11岁，我喜欢绘画和阅读，就像无糖美式咖啡，我是名没有污垢充满活力的初中生，我相信，“知识就是力量” 这是我的座右铭，我的母亲是一名教师，我的父亲是一名警察，我有一个可爱的弟弟，他只有5岁，我希望在初中生活中，我能学到更多的知识，
自己和妈妈写的,希望真正懂英语的帮我看一下...,hello everybody,my name is XXX,i am eleven years old.i like drawing and reading just as sugar free american coffee ,i'm a no dirt vibrant junior middle school students i believe that"knowledge is power".this is my motto my mother is a teacher and my father is a policeman.i have a lovely brother,he is only five years old i hope in the junior high school life,i can learn more knowledge thank.
中文意思：我的名字是XXX，我11岁，我喜欢绘画和阅读，就像无糖美式咖啡，我是名没有污垢充满活力的初中生，我相信，“知识就是力量” 这是我的座右铭，我的母亲是一名教师，我的父亲是一名警察，我有一个可爱的弟弟，他只有5岁，我希望在初中生活中，我能学到更多的知识，
Hello everybody!My name is XXX,I am eleven years old.I like drawing and reading just as much as I like sugar free american coffee (这段你是说你画画读书,就像你喜欢无糖美国咖啡吧).I'm no ordinary junior high schol student.(我不是你们平凡的初中生).I believe that knowledge is power and that is my motto.My mother is a teacher and my father is a policeman.I have a lovely brother,he is only five years old.I hope that in my junior high school life,I can gain more knowledge.Thank you.