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来一个英语大大帮我检查一下面这段话的语法和时态.顺便帮我改的简洁些,礼貌些.顺畅些,地道些.

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来一个英语大大帮我检查一下面这段话的语法和时态.顺便帮我改的简洁些,礼貌些.顺畅些,地道些.
Sorry for late reply,I just had no time to check mail cause term begans in my University ,I had seen the photos.it's the nice apart of memory in my Dali field trip .Thank you,and hope you-all have a pleasant vacation in China
前因::我在大理实习旅行时认识了一家法国人,一起出去玩我给他们做向导,他们拍了一些合影照发到我的邮箱里,就想表达:我最近大学开学一直在忙木有查看邮箱,回复晚了balabala的,希望他们在中国玩得愉快之类
I'm sorry it took me so long to reply your mail. I was too busy to check my mail because my new term had just begun. I have seen the photos, they look great. This field trip was a fantastic experience that I won't forget. Thank you, and wish you all a pleasant vacation in China.
这样地道多了,至于简洁么实在无能为力了,已经够简洁了,就这么几句话对吧.