作业帮英语好点的 能帮忙指导下我的英语作文有没有出现语法错误什么的吗
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英语好点的 能帮忙指导下我的英语作文有没有出现语法错误什么的吗
The risk of celebrity endorsement advertising
Turning on the TV,we can see numerous advertisements done by the celebrities including the filmstars,singers and so on.Some people believe it is an occasion to marketing promotionalstrategies,the use of celebrity has the fame strengths to promote products orbrands to quickly improve product or brand awareness,promote product sales orenhance the brand image.while others worry that the celebrity in the ads maybe distract the attention of people on the advertised goods,easilyoverwhelming.So far as I am concerned,everything is double-edged sword,celebrity giving businesses to bring huge benefits at the same time,due toimproper use or other reasons,but also involve great risk.currently,there are some risks of celebrity advertising.
First of all,Some spokesmen,their poor social image,which mayaffect product.For example,the protagonistof sex photo - Edison Chen endorsementof the advertising was banned.What is more,Ifcelebrities and advertising products without any intrinsic or obviousconnection,will form far-fetched,unbelievable feeling:some companies willoften find some irrelevant with celebrity endorsements,celebrity advertisingmakes the credibility and influence of the decline .
To sumup,the sponsors should be deliberative when Selecting celebrityendorsement.
The risk of celebrity endorsement advertising
Turning on the TV,we can see numerous advertisements done by the celebrities including the filmstars,singers and so on.Some people believe it is an occasion to marketing promotionalstrategies,the use of celebrity has the fame strengths to promote products orbrands to quickly improve product or brand awareness,promote product sales orenhance the brand image.while others worry that the celebrity in the ads maybe distract the attention of people on the advertised goods,easilyoverwhelming.So far as I am concerned,everything is double-edged sword,celebrity giving businesses to bring huge benefits at the same time,due toimproper use or other reasons,but also involve great risk.currently,there are some risks of celebrity advertising.
First of all,Some spokesmen,their poor social image,which mayaffect product.For example,the protagonistof sex photo - Edison Chen endorsementof the advertising was banned.What is more,Ifcelebrities and advertising products without any intrinsic or obviousconnection,will form far-fetched,unbelievable feeling:some companies willoften find some irrelevant with celebrity endorsements,celebrity advertisingmakes the credibility and influence of the decline .
To sumup,the sponsors should be deliberative when Selecting celebrityendorsement.
这篇文章需要大改啊,这么写语法有错的不说,关键看不太懂啊.顺便问下,你这是写的雅思作文么
再问： 额 实话说 这个很多都是网上翻译 因为我英语实在很不好 这个是广告英语作文 期末作业
再答： 额，网上翻译的不行啊，读不通顺都，而且这里用的词跟这篇文章的档次不匹配都。不如用些简单句简单词能把该表达的先表达出来，这么写老师会看出来的。
再问： 有空吗 能不能大概一句一句帮我排查 一两句也好 第一句有问题吗
再答： 加你了
再问： 额 实话说 这个很多都是网上翻译 因为我英语实在很不好 这个是广告英语作文 期末作业
再答： 额，网上翻译的不行啊，读不通顺都，而且这里用的词跟这篇文章的档次不匹配都。不如用些简单句简单词能把该表达的先表达出来，这么写老师会看出来的。
再问： 有空吗 能不能大概一句一句帮我排查 一两句也好 第一句有问题吗
再答： 加你了