作业帮英语大神们能帮我检查下语法吗,
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英语大神们能帮我检查下语法吗,
原文附在了下面,请各位达人指出其中的错误,感激不尽
I am attracted to this vacancy because I amvery interested in data analysis area including Statistics and Mathematics.During my undergraduate,I got 00% mark in courses of Statistics and ProbabilityTheory.Later,through 1 year master study of Finance and Economics in theUniversity of ——,I have not only built up the self-confidence that Ihave the capability to have an even better performance in this area,but alsosignificantly reinforced my knowledge,as a result I got 00% and 00% marks separately in courses of Financial Mathematics and Econometrics.In addition,Iused an empirical method to analysis the inflation in my dissertation which included analyzing massive amounts of data and econometrics method (ARIMA modeland VAR model).Therefore,I think I can meet the essential criteria 1,2,5,6 and the the desirable criteria 2.Based on my ability of academic and wellunderstanding of mathematics,statistics and economics theory,I believe I havethe ability to undertake main duties and responsibilities such statisticalsupport,academic research in centre and data analyzing,etc.
原文附在了下面,请各位达人指出其中的错误,感激不尽
I am attracted to this vacancy because I amvery interested in data analysis area including Statistics and Mathematics.During my undergraduate,I got 00% mark in courses of Statistics and ProbabilityTheory.Later,through 1 year master study of Finance and Economics in theUniversity of ——,I have not only built up the self-confidence that Ihave the capability to have an even better performance in this area,but alsosignificantly reinforced my knowledge,as a result I got 00% and 00% marks separately in courses of Financial Mathematics and Econometrics.In addition,Iused an empirical method to analysis the inflation in my dissertation which included analyzing massive amounts of data and econometrics method (ARIMA modeland VAR model).Therefore,I think I can meet the essential criteria 1,2,5,6 and the the desirable criteria 2.Based on my ability of academic and wellunderstanding of mathematics,statistics and economics theory,I believe I havethe ability to undertake main duties and responsibilities such statisticalsupport,academic research in centre and data analyzing,etc.
1、During my undergraduate 后面加一个study
2、mark改成points吧..（仅建议）
3、to analysis改成 to analyze
4、responsibilities such statisticalsupport 改成responsibilities on statistical support...
你写得很不错哦!
2、mark改成points吧..（仅建议）
3、to analysis改成 to analyze
4、responsibilities such statisticalsupport 改成responsibilities on statistical support...
你写得很不错哦!