英语修改,Chinese in my lifeIt was a routine night,my faMILY sat

英语修改,
Chinese in my life
It was a routine night,my faMILY sat together to watch a famous TV show caLLed “Happy Dictionary”.I thought it was because Mr Ji our great master of chinese nationaL cuLture has passed away just the other day ,To commemorate him,the theme of the prOGRAMME was about traditionaL chinese cuLTURE.
One of the competitors is from Zhejiang University ,the other is from xi`an Transportation University ,both of which are weLL known in China.The latter surprised me for Long.She could not only know every answer to the question.aLso the effect for each cause .She is fuLL of knowLedge and how fluentLY and accurately she spoke.Take this quIz for an exaMple.When the hostress asked whose the author of this a part of the poem..First.She spoke out the answear.then recited the whoie poem Next.When and where and what the wrItter wanted to express.FinallY.the sequence of out history was combed out by her.My father said in admiration.“She is really an aLIVE computer.nothing about Chinese culture can baffle her.”
Later my father told me to translate the passage “The journey down the Mekong”Cause I am nearly a fool in geography.I didnt do it well.So lack of chinese knowledGE is terrible.it relates more than chinese.
Chinese speak chinEse.chinese around us.However.I often ignore the importance of my mother language.Indistinctly.I hear something whispers in my ear and says that if youDONNOT
KNOW CHINESE WELL ,YOU CAN BARELY GO FAR.

一.
"One of the competitors is from Zhejiang University ,the other is from xi`an Transportation University "
可改为--
one competitor is from Zhejiang University,the other（comes from） Xi'an Transportation University
--理由：1.one of 通常是三者或三者以上中的一个,只有2个的话,可以用 one……the other……的句式
2.都用is from,有重复之嫌,可以换做comes from,或者干脆省略,地道的英语是允许这样的省略的
二.
"I hear something whispers in my ear and says that ……"
改为 I hear somebody whispering to me that……
理由：1.这句原文太中国化了,原意为“耳中响起了一个声音,对我说道……”
但是whisper in my ear 没有这样的用法,whisper其实就是低头耳语的意思,没必要重复,“对谁耳语” 可用whisper to sb,也不用say 来继续重复了
2.hear + sb doing sth 听见某人正在做某事
三.还有一些标点错误,估计楼主能自己发现,可能是打字时疏忽了