作业帮帮我看看我的英语作文 谢谢
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帮我看看我的英语作文 谢谢
这是我们的英语作文 不知道有没有错误 希望各位高手们能多多指点~~
I like play basketball very much. When I’m ten years old, I first got in touch with it and completely fell in love with it. I remember that I have two friends always played with me, we grown up together and of course they become my best friends.
That time, I have a dream. I want go to the NBA in the future. I remember when I told my mother this dream, she didn’t say anything but a smile. Now I know it’s only a dream. But I still love it very much.
Basketball has followed me nine years. When I feel sad, I play with he and will feel very easy; When I feel lonely, I play with he and he told me that there’s a friend always trust me and accompany me; When I feel happy, I will share with he and I think he will pleasure too. I totally regard him as my best friend.
Basketball makes me become a happy boy, I like the things around me everyday. Also, it teaches me, never give up. No matter what, I will do my best and don’t regret. I like Kobe Bryant just because he always tries his best in the game and his spirit lead me to forward.
Here, I want to say thank you my friend, I will together with you forever.
如果能够增加或删减的也可以~~谢谢
这是我们的英语作文 不知道有没有错误 希望各位高手们能多多指点~~
I like play basketball very much. When I’m ten years old, I first got in touch with it and completely fell in love with it. I remember that I have two friends always played with me, we grown up together and of course they become my best friends.
That time, I have a dream. I want go to the NBA in the future. I remember when I told my mother this dream, she didn’t say anything but a smile. Now I know it’s only a dream. But I still love it very much.
Basketball has followed me nine years. When I feel sad, I play with he and will feel very easy; When I feel lonely, I play with he and he told me that there’s a friend always trust me and accompany me; When I feel happy, I will share with he and I think he will pleasure too. I totally regard him as my best friend.
Basketball makes me become a happy boy, I like the things around me everyday. Also, it teaches me, never give up. No matter what, I will do my best and don’t regret. I like Kobe Bryant just because he always tries his best in the game and his spirit lead me to forward.
Here, I want to say thank you my friend, I will together with you forever.
如果能够增加或删减的也可以~~谢谢
I like play basketball very much.When I was ten years old,I first got in touch with it and completely fell in love with it.I remember that I had two friends always play with me,we grew up together and of course they became my best friends.
That time,I had a dream.I wanted go to the NBA in the future.I remember when I told my mother this dream,she didn’t say anything but a smile.Now I know it’s only a dream.But I still love it very much.
Basketball has followed me nine years.When I feel sad,I play with him and will feel very ease; When I feel lonely,I play with him and he tell me that there’s a friend always trust me and accompany me; When I feel happy,I will share with him and I think he will pleasure too.I totally regard him as my best friend.
Basketball makes me become a happy boy,I like the things around me everyday.Also,it teaches me,never give up.however,I will do my best and won’t regret.I like Kobe Bryant just because he always tries his best in the game and his spirit lead me to forward.
Here,I want to say thank you my friend,I will together with you forever.
过去时经常忘记哦!一些用词也不太准确!再就是主语和宾语的形式!下次需注意哦!
That time,I had a dream.I wanted go to the NBA in the future.I remember when I told my mother this dream,she didn’t say anything but a smile.Now I know it’s only a dream.But I still love it very much.
Basketball has followed me nine years.When I feel sad,I play with him and will feel very ease; When I feel lonely,I play with him and he tell me that there’s a friend always trust me and accompany me; When I feel happy,I will share with him and I think he will pleasure too.I totally regard him as my best friend.
Basketball makes me become a happy boy,I like the things around me everyday.Also,it teaches me,never give up.however,I will do my best and won’t regret.I like Kobe Bryant just because he always tries his best in the game and his spirit lead me to forward.
Here,I want to say thank you my friend,I will together with you forever.
过去时经常忘记哦!一些用词也不太准确!再就是主语和宾语的形式!下次需注意哦!