根据文章帮我出几道问题,或把错误的地方指出来

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根据文章帮我出几道问题,或把错误的地方指出来
"Thinking of You"
When will the moon be clear and bright?
With a cup of wine in my hand,I ask the blue sky.
I don't know what season it would be in the heavens on this night.
I'd like to ride the wind to fly home.
Yet I fear the crystal and jade mansions are much too high and cold for me.
Dancing with my moon-lit shadow
It does not seem like the human world
The moon rounds the red mansion Stoops to silk-pad doors
Shines upon the sleepless Bearing no grudge
Why does the moon tend to be full when people are apart?
People may have sorrow or joy,be near or far apart
The moon may be dim or bright,wax or wane
This has been going on since the beginning of time
May we all be blessed with longevity Though far apart,we are still able to share the beauty of the moon together.

谁的手笔?
过于拘泥原作的字面意思,太直了.信则信矣,但距离印尼首都,还稍微有那么一点点路程.:)

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