作业帮这些RUN-ON句子有什么问题吗?
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这些RUN-ON句子有什么问题吗?
谢谢了帮了大忙
While,as a tourism destination,as to some tourists withhigh level of requirements as to travelling,they will certainly help inimproving the travel destination,and reflect where the problem lies through suggestion,thus promoting the improvement of tourism destination,greatly increasing thesustainable development of tourism destination; in the aspect of consumption,purchase of local food and commodity and support for products and crafts oflocal people can not only support the local economy,culture and tradition,butalso reduce the extra resource consumption and carbon demission resulted formlong distance goods transportation.(structure issues—this is a run-on sentence,punctuation,word choice,word order)
而作为一个旅游地，对于有一些对旅游要求高的游客来说，他们一定会帮助改善旅游地，通过建议和反映问题所在，从而促使旅游地的改进，大大的增加的旅游地的可持续发展。而在消费方面，购买当地生产食品和用品，支持当地人生产的产品和手工艺品，不光支持当地经济、文化和传统，而且减少因为长途运输货品带来的额外的能源消耗和碳排放
老师说这是RUN-ON 的句子。我不知道怎么改才能正确。
谢谢了帮了大忙
While,as a tourism destination,as to some tourists withhigh level of requirements as to travelling,they will certainly help inimproving the travel destination,and reflect where the problem lies through suggestion,thus promoting the improvement of tourism destination,greatly increasing thesustainable development of tourism destination; in the aspect of consumption,purchase of local food and commodity and support for products and crafts oflocal people can not only support the local economy,culture and tradition,butalso reduce the extra resource consumption and carbon demission resulted formlong distance goods transportation.(structure issues—this is a run-on sentence,punctuation,word choice,word order)
而作为一个旅游地，对于有一些对旅游要求高的游客来说，他们一定会帮助改善旅游地，通过建议和反映问题所在，从而促使旅游地的改进，大大的增加的旅游地的可持续发展。而在消费方面，购买当地生产食品和用品，支持当地人生产的产品和手工艺品，不光支持当地经济、文化和传统，而且减少因为长途运输货品带来的额外的能源消耗和碳排放
老师说这是RUN-ON 的句子。我不知道怎么改才能正确。
很难理解你的重点.有太多的信息,但组织太乱.我没看懂!
再问： 而作为一个旅游地，对于有一些对旅游要求高的游客来说，他们一定会帮助改善旅游地，通过建议和反映问题所在，从而促使旅游地的改进，大大的增加的旅游地的可持续发展。而在消费方面，购买当地生产食品和用品，支持当地人生产的产品和手工艺品，不光支持当地经济、文化和传统，而且减少因为长途运输货品带来的额外的能源消耗和碳排放
老师说这是RUN-ON 的句子。我不知道怎么改才能正确。
再答： As a tourist spot, it has to encounter some high-level requisitions from the tourists, these people will contribute ideas to upgrade the services via their suggestions to reflect where the problem lies on in order to improve the standard the tourist destination, and to enhance the consistency of the development for the location. For the aspect of the consumption, through the spending to the local food, hand craft and production by the tourists are not only supporting to the local economy, culture and tradition, these will also reduce the additional burning of the energy and carbon emission which result from a long distance carriage.
再问： 而作为一个旅游地，对于有一些对旅游要求高的游客来说，他们一定会帮助改善旅游地，通过建议和反映问题所在，从而促使旅游地的改进，大大的增加的旅游地的可持续发展。而在消费方面，购买当地生产食品和用品，支持当地人生产的产品和手工艺品，不光支持当地经济、文化和传统，而且减少因为长途运输货品带来的额外的能源消耗和碳排放
老师说这是RUN-ON 的句子。我不知道怎么改才能正确。
再答： As a tourist spot, it has to encounter some high-level requisitions from the tourists, these people will contribute ideas to upgrade the services via their suggestions to reflect where the problem lies on in order to improve the standard the tourist destination, and to enhance the consistency of the development for the location. For the aspect of the consumption, through the spending to the local food, hand craft and production by the tourists are not only supporting to the local economy, culture and tradition, these will also reduce the additional burning of the energy and carbon emission which result from a long distance carriage.
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