作业帮音乐作文(作文)
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My favorite music A lot of people say ,"Listen to music, you will become smarter .It is great ." There are many kinds of the music,like claassical music,pop music,folk music......But my favorite music is folk music, It is very traditional! And my favorite singer is Song Zuying.She has a good voice .I love her very much. Music is well.It can make your mind. I like it very much! 请老师补充批阅！谢谢
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My favorite music A lot of people say ,"Listen to music, you will become smarter .It is great ."
There are many kinds of music,like claassical music,pop music,folk music and so on.But my favorite music is folk music, It is very traditional! And my favorite singer is Song Zuying.She has a good voice .I love her very much.
Music is good.It can make you relaxed. I like it very much!
作为初一的学生,你这篇作文写得还是很不错的.没有什么太大的错误.句型和短语使用都比较到位.就是最后一句里的MAKE YOUR MIND我不知道你要表达的是什么意思,所以我把它改成了MAKE YOU RELAXED(使你放松).
继续努力吧,你会取得更大进步!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My favorite music A lot of people say ,"Listen to music, you will become smarter .It is great ."
There are many kinds of music,like claassical music,pop music,folk music and so on.But my favorite music is folk music, It is very traditional! And my favorite singer is Song Zuying.She has a good voice .I love her very much.
Music is good.It can make you relaxed. I like it very much!
作为初一的学生,你这篇作文写得还是很不错的.没有什么太大的错误.句型和短语使用都比较到位.就是最后一句里的MAKE YOUR MIND我不知道你要表达的是什么意思,所以我把它改成了MAKE YOU RELAXED(使你放松).
继续努力吧,你会取得更大进步!
最终答案：略