作业帮帮我看看这篇求职信语法有没有错?功课来
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帮我看看这篇求职信语法有没有错?功课来
Dear Mr.Jimmy Wong:
I am writing to apply for the post of Shop Assistant ,as currently advertised on your website.
As you will see from my attached curriculum vitae ,I am a 20 year-old graduate in Business and Marketing from Yijin Project,with two years of experience in sales and marketing .My present current position is sales for ABC Company.
After graduation ,apart form practical experience in the post I have worked in ,I have studied extensively at evening school,attending courses in Shop Assistant.I have also attended on various internal training courses in the same areas in my previous company.
I am interested in the post advertised because it seems to be the type of opportunities I am seeking moving into a well-known international manufacturer of quality product and having the experience of managing regional sales.
I hope my application and my curriculum vitae will meet your requirements .I am available for an interview at any time,and my presennnt employers would be happy to give a reference.I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Max Law
Dear Mr.Jimmy Wong:
I am writing to apply for the post of Shop Assistant ,as currently advertised on your website.
As you will see from my attached curriculum vitae ,I am a 20 year-old graduate in Business and Marketing from Yijin Project,with two years of experience in sales and marketing .My present current position is sales for ABC Company.
After graduation ,apart form practical experience in the post I have worked in ,I have studied extensively at evening school,attending courses in Shop Assistant.I have also attended on various internal training courses in the same areas in my previous company.
I am interested in the post advertised because it seems to be the type of opportunities I am seeking moving into a well-known international manufacturer of quality product and having the experience of managing regional sales.
I hope my application and my curriculum vitae will meet your requirements .I am available for an interview at any time,and my presennnt employers would be happy to give a reference.I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Max Law
My present current position is sales for ABC Company.改为
My current position is sales for ABC Company.（present 多余）
After graduation ,apart form practical experience in the post I have worked in,I have studied extensively at evening school,attending courses in Shop Assistant.=》
After graduation ,apart from gaining practical experience in the post where I worked,I also studied entensively at evening school,attending courses like Shop Assistant.
it seems to be the type of opportunities I am seeking => it gives me the opportunity to move..and to have...
I am available for an interview at any time.=> I am available for interview at any time.
I look forward to hearing from you.=》Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
再问： it gives me the opportunity to move..and to have...這句什麼意思?
再答： I am interested in the post advertised because it gives me the opportunity to move into a well-known international manufacturer of quality product, and to have the experience of managing regional sales. 就是说这工作给了我xx的机会。比原文直接了点。
My current position is sales for ABC Company.（present 多余）
After graduation ,apart form practical experience in the post I have worked in,I have studied extensively at evening school,attending courses in Shop Assistant.=》
After graduation ,apart from gaining practical experience in the post where I worked,I also studied entensively at evening school,attending courses like Shop Assistant.
it seems to be the type of opportunities I am seeking => it gives me the opportunity to move..and to have...
I am available for an interview at any time.=> I am available for interview at any time.
I look forward to hearing from you.=》Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
再问： it gives me the opportunity to move..and to have...這句什麼意思?
再答： I am interested in the post advertised because it gives me the opportunity to move into a well-known international manufacturer of quality product, and to have the experience of managing regional sales. 就是说这工作给了我xx的机会。比原文直接了点。