修改英语作文It was a fine day.An old man with hi little grandson w

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修改英语作文
It was a fine day.An old man with hi little grandson went fishing.At first ,they didn’t catch little fish ..but few mintues ago,the old man caught a big fish with his net.The little boy looked at the big fish and very happy.Later,they caught some fish too.In afternoom,the old man took his grandson home.The old man put the fish on the table and he went to kill fish.“grandpa,we shouldn’t eat it.Fish is our friend.”so they kept the fish alive,and took it back to the river.But when they put it into river,a bigger fish came here and aet it.

the old man caught a big fish with his net (with改 by)
The little boy looked at the big fish and very happy. (and 后加was)
Later,they caught some fish too.(改为 some other fishes)
In afternoom(In the afternoon)
the old man took his grandson home. (home前加to his)
The old man put the fish on the table and he went to kill fish.(and 后面改为 was going to kill it)
But when they put it into river,a bigger fish came here and aet it.(but afteer they put it into the river,a bigger fish went there and eat it)
是小学生的作文吗?那这么改还没什么问题.

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