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I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet.I was then in a school for students form Tibet.As we were all left home at early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life.We had to do the washing,cleaningand shopping by us.Therefore we seldom felt lonely or helplessly.We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends,we would play basketball,swimming in the pool or go for a picnic.We were living in a big family.We treat each other as brothers and sisters.If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study,the other would help him out.It has been five years when we graduated,but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
解题思路: 优点:Therefore,At weekends,we would 过去常常If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study,等,用的很好。 缺点:注意被动语态的用法,冠词,反身代词,other,since的用法。
解题过程:
第一句去掉yet.与still重复。form拼错,应from。we were all left 应去掉were 。As we all left home。 at early age应 at an early age,by us应by ourselves.swimming应swim与 play 并列,the other 应the others.when we graduated应since we graduated.
优点:Therefore,At weekends,we would 过去常常If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study,等,用的很好。
缺点:注意被动语态的用法,冠词,反身代词,other,since的用法。
最终答案:略