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求帮改错~Wu Yongqing,91,lived in a rented cottage in Chongqing.S

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求帮改错~
Wu Yongqing,91,lived in a rented cottage in Chongqing.She moved there after her husband died in 1971.The old woman,who has children can get more than 500 yuan a month from the government.Her cottage is small but simple.Her only comforts are a breaking sofa and an electric ceiling fan,which were both founded on the street.She is good for cleaning and she can cook every day.She believes that she is old but not uselessly and she can take better care of himself than any nurse.She often walks in the nearby park every morning and talks to each other there.She can get on well with her neighbour.She likes this a kind of life
Wu Yongqing, 91, lives in a rented cottage in Chongqing. She moved there after her husband died in 1971.The old woman, who has no children can get more than 500 yuan a month from the government.Her cottage is small and simple.Her only comforts are a breaking sofa and a ceiling fanner, which were both found on the street.She is good at cleaning and she can cook every day.Although she is old, she believes that she can take care of herself better than any nurse.She often walks in the nearby park every morning and talks with others.She can get on well with her neighbour.She is happy for living .
唉,不知道你写这篇文章想表达一个什么内容,改到最后都不知道怎么改了,只是帮忙看了一下语法.