作业帮翻译一个句子（有悬赏）
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翻译一个句子（有悬赏）
I hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes aways.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home work with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
有什么错的麻烦帮个忙改一下,并说下为什么（又追加）
I hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes aways.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home work with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
有什么错的麻烦帮个忙改一下,并说下为什么（又追加）
singing old songs(你前面用holding后面就忘啦~)
passed away(怎么能用现在时呢O(∩_∩)O)
He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,and he was strong and powerful.(你一句话里两个谓语哦)
In fact（In a fact是什么?）
My classmates were scared due to his appearance（原句似乎有一点他故意去吓你的同学的感觉,但是你的意思应该是他吓到了同学）
再问： 再帮我看看还有没有了呗~~辛苦了
再答： 哦~发现了~ she used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs.应该是这样才对~你应该表达的是过去她常常做什么~如果是习惯做应该是she used to holding me on her knees and singing old songs. when they came over to play or did home work with me. （during感觉不是太对，而且时态要一致，前面是came后面就不能用do）~暂时就这些
再问： 恩 谢了 再给你20啦，辛苦啦
再答： 随便啦~我是红领巾嘎嘎
passed away(怎么能用现在时呢O(∩_∩)O)
He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,and he was strong and powerful.(你一句话里两个谓语哦)
In fact（In a fact是什么?）
My classmates were scared due to his appearance（原句似乎有一点他故意去吓你的同学的感觉,但是你的意思应该是他吓到了同学）
再问： 再帮我看看还有没有了呗~~辛苦了
再答： 哦~发现了~ she used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs.应该是这样才对~你应该表达的是过去她常常做什么~如果是习惯做应该是she used to holding me on her knees and singing old songs. when they came over to play or did home work with me. （during感觉不是太对，而且时态要一致，前面是came后面就不能用do）~暂时就这些
再问： 恩 谢了 再给你20啦，辛苦啦
再答： 随便啦~我是红领巾嘎嘎