作业帮语法的错误可能比较多 可以直接在原文上修改后给我
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语法的错误可能比较多 可以直接在原文上修改后给我
是关于《在云端》这部电影的 梗概
如果能帮忙继续续写一点 ：）
Synopsis of Up in the Air
the movie is talking about a man called Ryan.He is a Termination Facilitator .He always being alone and even do not keep touch with his family.His life philosophy is avoiding the duty and keeps single with a life style —“on the road”.His life's goal is has 10 million airlines mileage and to be the Airlines’ Platinum member.
One day Ryan met someone like him – always being alone and spends a lot of time in the airplane and hotel.She named Alex.When Ryan finished his travel back to his company he finds there is a young girl named Natalie and she plans to use Internet to firing workers.It makes Ryan unhappy and he thought the girl doesn’t know about this industry so she has such a naive idea.Ryan talk about this question with his boss so his boss let Ryan appears a necessary job—take Natalie to firing workers.
是关于《在云端》这部电影的 梗概
如果能帮忙继续续写一点 ：）
Synopsis of Up in the Air
the movie is talking about a man called Ryan.He is a Termination Facilitator .He always being alone and even do not keep touch with his family.His life philosophy is avoiding the duty and keeps single with a life style —“on the road”.His life's goal is has 10 million airlines mileage and to be the Airlines’ Platinum member.
One day Ryan met someone like him – always being alone and spends a lot of time in the airplane and hotel.She named Alex.When Ryan finished his travel back to his company he finds there is a young girl named Natalie and she plans to use Internet to firing workers.It makes Ryan unhappy and he thought the girl doesn’t know about this industry so she has such a naive idea.Ryan talk about this question with his boss so his boss let Ryan appears a necessary job—take Natalie to firing workers.
He always being alone ---is being或把being---is
keep touch with ---keep in touch with
is avoiding the duty and keeps ---is to avoid.and keep
His life's goal is has ---is that he wants to have.and be.
第二段怎么过去时,现在时混用啊,很多地方都混了
use Internet to firing ---to fire
makes Ryan unhappy and he thought你到底用现在时还是过去时?
Ryan talk 用现在时加S,过去时talked
let Ryan appears a necessary job?想表达什么意思?let sb do sth
keep touch with ---keep in touch with
is avoiding the duty and keeps ---is to avoid.and keep
His life's goal is has ---is that he wants to have.and be.
第二段怎么过去时,现在时混用啊,很多地方都混了
use Internet to firing ---to fire
makes Ryan unhappy and he thought你到底用现在时还是过去时?
Ryan talk 用现在时加S,过去时talked
let Ryan appears a necessary job?想表达什么意思?let sb do sth
英语语法错误帮我检查一下有什么语法上的错误,最好是直接在原文上修改L:Today,we are going to tal
这段话有七处错误,请用修改符号在原文上修改.
有没有人可以帮我修改这篇文章,改改语法上的错误之类的,谢谢啊谢谢,急用
求修改语法!就可以直接在上面修改,在文章上面改成正确的语法就可以
4．下面的语段有好几处语病,请根据文后要求,用规定的符号直接在原文上修改.（4分） 换用号：增补号：
下面是一个学生的作文片段,根据文后要求用规定符号在原文上直接修改. 详情见下!
用恰当的符号修改下面短文中的错误，在原文上修改。
试卷上的修改病句.下面的语段有好几处语病,请根据文后要求,用规定的符号直接在原文上修改.（4分）换用号：增补号：删除号：
哪位英语好的好心人能帮我修改下作文.在此万分感激.主要是看下语法句型上的错误.
修改下面这段中有错误的地方,用修改符号在原文中修改
有道语文题目问问大家： 下面这段话是一位同学写的,有四处错误,请你在原文上帮助修改
帮我看一下这篇作文语法哪里有错误还有哪些地方可以修改一下的,