作业帮英文作文(作文评改)
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When I was 4 years old .I firsr play baskerball wich my farher.I thoughr baskerball is an very interesring sporrs.I loved it very much.in my fifth birthday party.I got my first basketball as a ptesent.I was very excited.I played ir every day.When I was 7 I went to school.Although I thoughr study was very hard,I also played basketball sometimes.,I enjoyed playing baskerball all the time .In 2003,I joined the school basketball team.Thar made me very happy.Mu baskerball skill is quite well.So,I wanr ro be the besr player in rhe BBA.And I an going ro win lors of prize for our team in rhe future.
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When I was 4 years old .I first played basketball with my father.I thought basketball is an very interesring sport.I loved it very much.in my fifth birthday party.I got my first basketball as a present.I was very excited.I played it every day.When I was 7 I went to school.Although I thought I should study very hard,I also played basketball sometimes.,I enjoyed playing basketball all the time .In 2003,I joined the school basketball team.That made me very happy.My baskerball skill is quite good .So,I want to be the best player in the CBA.And I am going ro win lots of prizes for our team in the future. 可能是由于疏忽,文中有多处单词拼写错误,相信如果手写就不会出现这种现象.文章写的不错.叙述的很有条理,加油!
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最终答案：略
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When I was 4 years old .I first played basketball with my father.I thought basketball is an very interesring sport.I loved it very much.in my fifth birthday party.I got my first basketball as a present.I was very excited.I played it every day.When I was 7 I went to school.Although I thought I should study very hard,I also played basketball sometimes.,I enjoyed playing basketball all the time .In 2003,I joined the school basketball team.That made me very happy.My baskerball skill is quite good .So,I want to be the best player in the CBA.And I am going ro win lots of prizes for our team in the future. 可能是由于疏忽,文中有多处单词拼写错误,相信如果手写就不会出现这种现象.文章写的不错.叙述的很有条理,加油!
修改请参见红体字.
最终答案：略