作业帮这篇英语作文跑题没有 跑题的话应该如何修改
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这篇英语作文跑题没有 跑题的话应该如何修改
My weekend
This is a special weekend doesnt like other weekends that I had gone through. I got up late as usual, when I went outside of my dormitory I was shocked. It's snowing! I can't help but shouted. All the bad feelings of the boring winter was dispeared following the drop of snow. This winter is warm than last year and snow is rare in my hometown, thus the coming of snow is out of my expectation. I carefully steped on to the snow, the feeling of soft transmitted through my body and into all the cells. Then I turned around and went upstairs to call all of my friends. We were walking in the snowy winter, talking about the future after our graduation and having a delicious hotpot. The snow released us from a just finished exam and successfully calm ourselves down. All the evils can be covered by snow, what abou the blues of exam?
My weekend
This is a special weekend doesnt like other weekends that I had gone through. I got up late as usual, when I went outside of my dormitory I was shocked. It's snowing! I can't help but shouted. All the bad feelings of the boring winter was dispeared following the drop of snow. This winter is warm than last year and snow is rare in my hometown, thus the coming of snow is out of my expectation. I carefully steped on to the snow, the feeling of soft transmitted through my body and into all the cells. Then I turned around and went upstairs to call all of my friends. We were walking in the snowy winter, talking about the future after our graduation and having a delicious hotpot. The snow released us from a just finished exam and successfully calm ourselves down. All the evils can be covered by snow, what abou the blues of exam?
文章写的蛮好的,结尾时需点题,回到我的周末这个话题上来,“因为有了这场雪,使得周末更加.再加上你的一些心理感受.”类似的总结性的收尾,或者再加上一些你对以后的周末的期待等,注意控制字数,如果有限制的话