My favourite quote from Albert Einstein is"Learning from yes

My favourite quote from Albert Einstein is"Learning from yesterday,live for today,and hope for tomorrow.The important thing is no to stop questioning.'I think it is quite right,because you can avoid making same mistakes over and over if we learn from the past.We will also enjoy your life more and treasure every moment,whether we live for today.And if we hope for tomorrow,we could get through difficult time and use our dreams to creat a better world in the puture.Most in all,we must always ask questions and never take things for granted.By being curious,we will be discover new things and learn more about the world and ourselves.

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My favourite quote from Albert Einstein is"Learning from yesterday,live for today,and hope for tomorrow.The important thing is no to stop questioning.'
(My favorite motto comes from Albert Einstein:‘Learning from yesterday,live for today,and hope for tomorrow.The important thing is not to stop questioning.’)
你要表达成quote from xxx is ….其实也不是说不可以,只是读上去有点别扭,不是很通顺.
I think it is quite right,because you can avoid making same mistakes over and over if we learn from the past.
(I think this is quite significant.If we learn from the past,we can avoid making the same mistakes again and again.)
1.if跟的是we,但怎么because跟的是you呢?
2.最好不要用right,correct这类词语,以前老师告诉我们,这类词语比较useless.为什么对?是因为它有道理,有意义.换一个具体化的形容词会比较好哦.
We will also enjoy your life more and treasure every moment,whether we live for today.
(If we live for today,we will enjoy our life and treasure every moment.)
And if we hope for tomorrow,we could get through difficult time and use our dreams to creat a better world in the puture.
(And if we hope for tomorrow,we could keep positive for the future and overcome the difficulties.)
后面那句说得有点太过了,我改成“保持乐观心态,克服困难”
Most in all,we must always ask questions and never take things for granted.By being curious,we will be discover new things and learn more about the world and ourselves.
(Last but not the least,we should keep asking question and never take things for granted.Curiosity will help us discover new things and learn more about the world.)
1.Most in all你是想表达“最重要的”这个意思吗?没有most in all的说法.
2.We must always ask questions意思是我们要一直不断的提问.这个说法有点吓人吧……其实是我们要保持多问问题,多思考.
3.通过好奇,我们不一定会发现新事物.改成“好奇心帮助我们发现新事物”会好一点.