英语自我介绍改错All because of you,ChengDu will be better.My name's

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英语自我介绍改错
All because of you,ChengDu will be better.
My name's Tan Hangxu.Henry King is my englishname.I like the name,Because it is my friend(French) gave me.And "KING" is the meaning of the Monarch,the Chinese meaning is gold^^.haha..
I am a student.I study tourism and tourism management.I hope I can become a qualified tourism workers,I hope can introduce my hometown to more people...I hope I can improve my English ability,Because my English is .
bad bad bad,-__-!I hope my writing at a later time do not look up words in the dictionary.
I like music,Jolin and Wang Lihong is my idol,Because they work very hard,but the most important thing is they song is very beautiful.I also really love movie >_
那个I love my City是那个啥，随便贴出来耍的。

Because it is my friend(French) ★that★ gave me.(强调句型it is...that...)
I ★am studying★ tourism and tourism management.I hope I can become a qualified tourism ★worker★,I hope ★I★ can introduce my hometown to more people...
but the most important thing is ★their songs are★ very beautiful.
It is ★really very★ classic.(两词重复了,选一个就行)
总的来说,你的基础语法还要巩固才行啊,单复数要搞清楚.
还有,你这篇文章到底要表达什么啊,首尾说你love your city,可中间关于city只字未提,全是自我介绍.整篇文章结构有问题.

All because of you ,Chengdu will be better because of you,my heart is die.be my all because of you.这个是啥 Because of you,my name is maybe just bad because of past.better person and you will be Belive my, you will be better.是什么意思 Because you make me believe everything will be better It s all because of you 歌词 Because of you,everything will be beautiful! 中考选择英语Why all of you look very nervous?It's all because of My heart will always be full of nostalgia,because of you,who it's all because of you英文歌词.有句是you are my shine after the ra I need you,because I love you .My memorise of love will be o