The first day I come to school

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请老师评改作文：要求：①70词以上②记叙文③文题为《我上学的第一天》④过去式⑤必须有时间状语从句以下是我自己写的汉译：亲爱的日记今天是我中学的第一天，我感到非常的高兴和激动。我们先在操场上集合。然后我们的新老师领着我们进入了一个陌生的教室。当我站起来介绍自己的时候我感到非常尴尬（时状）。过了一小会，我看见了我的老同学（或老朋友），我还发现我们的新老师很和蔼，所以我感到好多了。在我上完第一节课后，我和我的老同学（或老朋友），谈论我们的新老师，我们都认为她对我们很好，所以我们很喜欢她。我们这一天结束时都很高兴。我英语写的很囧，就不贴出来只要意思相近就行，谢谢老师

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The first day I come to school
This was the first day I came to school,I felt very happy and excited.
First ,we got together on the play ground.then we followed our new teacher to come into a new classroom. I felt very embarrassed when I stood up to introduce myself to others. After a little ,I saw my old classmates and I also found that our new teacher was very kind ,so I felt much better .
After the first lesson ,I talked about my new teacher with my old friends.We all thought that she was friendly to us .We all liked her very much.
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