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Many people are intrested in the compute games,however,some

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Many people are intrested in the compute games,however,some people addict themselves to the compute game.If they don`t control themselves well,not only will it waste time,but also harm eyes a lot .It is well worth thinking to the problem that how to resist the temptation to compute games.
Why do we abandon ourselves to playing games In my opinion,the reason is that we can`t treat the temptation rightly .Consequently,in order to resist the bad temptation,first of all,we should impove the understanding to what the bad temptation is and analyse calmly it.Secondly,strengthen our willpower.We can avoid to the condition which is not beneficial to us,stop contacting with the bad friends.It is good to resist the temptation to compute games.
We should learn to how to encourage and supervise ourselves.It is the best way to resist the temptation.或有些句子怎样可以改得更复杂点,
computer game or PC game
however?第一句不是表达转折的意思吧?what is more好点.
but also前面逗号应该去点吧?
It这句话感觉有点别扭.It is well worth to think about how to the temptation of computer games.
abandon ourselves to play...
treat换成deal with 是不是好点
understanding what the ...同位语从句吧
analyse it calmly比较通
Secondly,strengthen our willpower.不是一句话啊
The secound point is to strengthen...
We can avoid the condition去掉to
and stop ...或者逗号后面+like,It is helpful to resist the temptation of ...
how to encourage and supervise ourselves可以换成 how to motivate and regulate ourselves.或者how to self-motivate和self-regulate.
We should learn to how to how to motivate and regulate ourselves,which is the best way to resist the temptation
水平不高探讨一下,请大家指出我的错误too