高中英语作文题目有个小男孩喜欢学艺术和街舞但他父母不同意,请你给他提出建议并分析他父母不同意的理由

高中英语作文题目有个小男孩喜欢学艺术和街舞但他父母不同意,请你给他提出建议并分析他父母不同意的理由

给你提供一个作文思路步骤如下：
一、拟出作文要点提纲：
• A little boy is fond of art and street dancing
• His parents quarrel withhim about his favourites (what he is favourite)
• Some suggestions about one’s favourite.
-- Both of them ought to give way to each other and make an agreement.
--The boy should spend more time studying the courses in school and helping his parents with the housework.
--The parents should allow that it is good for his son to have some hobbies.
• Analysis on such a phenomenon
--The teenagers go in for fashion.
--The olds are worried about their school works.
二、构思作文层次
• 描述现象
• 分析双方的心态和理由
• 提出建议
三、成文步骤
•用较简单的句子把提纲要点梳理成段
A little boy is fond of art and street dancing.His parents quarrel with him about his favourites.The teenagers nowadays go in for the fashion.The parents are worried about their school works.I think both of them ought to give way to each other and make an agreement.The boy should spend more time studying the courses in school and helping his parents with the housework.The parents should allow that it is good for his son to have some hobbies.
• 通过过渡句及连接手及使行文紧凑
A little boy is fond of art and street dancing,(but) his parents quarrel with him about his favourites.(Why there always is such a phenomenon?On the one hand,) the teenagers nowadays go in for fashion.(On the other hand,) the parents are worried about their school works.(My suggestion) is that both of them ought to give way to each other and make an agreement.(For example,) the boy should spend more time studying the courses in school and helping his parents with the housework,(while) the parents should allow that it is good for his son to have some hobbies.
• 用较复杂的句式进行润色
A little boy is fond of art and street dancing,(while) his parents quarrel with him about (what he is favourite).Why there always is such a phenomenon?On the one hand,the teenagers nowadays go in for (something that is in the current mode).On the other hand,the parents are worried about (their children while the hours away with) their school works.My suggestion is that both of them ought to give way to each other and make an agreement (which satisfies the demands of both parties).For example,(not onlt) should the boy spend more time studying the courses in school and helping his parents with the housework,(but also) the parents should allow that it is good for his son to have some hobbies.