作业帮英语作文改正（题目：为什么作为一名志愿者?）
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英语作文改正（题目：为什么作为一名志愿者?）
Dear Sir or Madam:
I'm Li Hua ,a middle school student in Liupanshui.I read the newspaper that you are looking for some volunteers to serve the Eighth Guizhou Tourism Development Conference,I'd like to be a volunteer.Because I like helping who needs some help,And I think give other people some help and help myself.Oh,I am a sixteen girl.I have a healthy body.I like drawing and singing ,I can do many things.
First,I can cheer many old people up.Because I often chat with my grandmother.
Second,I can draw some spotlights.Let more and more people want to go there.
Third,I have many friends.So I can friendly with other people.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I'm Li Hua ,a middle school student in Liupanshui.I read the newspaper that you are looking for some volunteers to serve the Eighth Guizhou Tourism Development Conference,I'd like to be a volunteer.Because I like helping who needs some help,And I think give other people some help and help myself.Oh,I am a sixteen girl.I have a healthy body.I like drawing and singing ,I can do many things.
First,I can cheer many old people up.Because I often chat with my grandmother.
Second,I can draw some spotlights.Let more and more people want to go there.
Third,I have many friends.So I can friendly with other people.
I read the newspaper that you are looking for some volunteers to serve the Eighth Guizhou Tourism Development Conference,I'd like to be a volunteer.不对,有三个谓语动词,只有that一个连词,应该在I would like前面加上and.
Because I like helping who needs some help,不对定语从句缺少先行词,应该为like helping those who need help.
And I think give other people some help and help myself不对,我认为帮助别人和帮助自己,意思不通啊.
I can friendly with other people.应该是can be
应该最后有总结.
再问： And I think give other people some help and help myself 我想说的是：我认为帮助他人就是帮助我自己，那个，能问一下，如何改么？ 还有这句I'd like to be a volunteer.（包括前面的）是原本的作文题目。
再答： and i think helping others is just to help myself. 还有如果是书信的话，后面应该加上your sincerely,XXX
Because I like helping who needs some help,不对定语从句缺少先行词,应该为like helping those who need help.
And I think give other people some help and help myself不对,我认为帮助别人和帮助自己,意思不通啊.
I can friendly with other people.应该是can be
应该最后有总结.
再问： And I think give other people some help and help myself 我想说的是：我认为帮助他人就是帮助我自己，那个，能问一下，如何改么？ 还有这句I'd like to be a volunteer.（包括前面的）是原本的作文题目。
再答： and i think helping others is just to help myself. 还有如果是书信的话，后面应该加上your sincerely,XXX