作业帮初中英文稿子,求修改.
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初中英文稿子,求修改.
（这是我的英文演讲稿子,题目是earthquake,如果可以的话,希望各亲们帮我找出错误,看看有没什么语病,或提点建议,谢谢了.这是写关于台湾地震的）
Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls, good afternoon! I am NO.xxx.Today , I’d like to make a speech, and my title is “earthquake”..
A terrible earthquake happened in South Taiwan on March 4. I still remember the scene at that time. We were having the science lesson when the earthquake happened. It shook slightly first, and I wasn’t afraid of it at all. But suddenly, the classroom shook terribly as if a giant held us.I felt so dizzy and afraid.In fact, I haven’t experienced a big earthquake like this before.The teacher helped us escape from the classroom, and we all ran out of it quickly.
After the earthquake,the first thing I remembered is my home,the place makes my heart warm. Do you know? Many people died in terrible earthquakes. We should be grateful,because we can survive this time.
From the earthquake,I know more about life. When the earthquake happened,I was afraid to die.Because,there are a lot of people love me and care me all the time. With their good care,I grow up happily.I learned how to cherish everything. My parents,my teachers,my classmates and my friends are always the sunshine behind me, they always give me confidence and courage.I can’t thank them enough.So,please cherish and love the people around you from now on,don’t let your life regret!
That’s all , thank you.
（这是我的英文演讲稿子,题目是earthquake,如果可以的话,希望各亲们帮我找出错误,看看有没什么语病,或提点建议,谢谢了.这是写关于台湾地震的）
Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls, good afternoon! I am NO.xxx.Today , I’d like to make a speech, and my title is “earthquake”..
A terrible earthquake happened in South Taiwan on March 4. I still remember the scene at that time. We were having the science lesson when the earthquake happened. It shook slightly first, and I wasn’t afraid of it at all. But suddenly, the classroom shook terribly as if a giant held us.I felt so dizzy and afraid.In fact, I haven’t experienced a big earthquake like this before.The teacher helped us escape from the classroom, and we all ran out of it quickly.
After the earthquake,the first thing I remembered is my home,the place makes my heart warm. Do you know? Many people died in terrible earthquakes. We should be grateful,because we can survive this time.
From the earthquake,I know more about life. When the earthquake happened,I was afraid to die.Because,there are a lot of people love me and care me all the time. With their good care,I grow up happily.I learned how to cherish everything. My parents,my teachers,my classmates and my friends are always the sunshine behind me, they always give me confidence and courage.I can’t thank them enough.So,please cherish and love the people around you from now on,don’t let your life regret!
That’s all , thank you.
只改了一些句子.其他的看起来还可以.
I still remembered the scene at that time.We were having science lesson when the earthquake happened.
At first,it shook slightly,and I wasn’t afraid of it at all.
After the earthquake,the first thing I remembered is my home,the place that makes my heart warm.As you know,many people.
We should be grateful,because we survived this time.
From the earthquake,I know more about life.When the earthquake happened,I was afraid I might die.It is because,there are a lot of people who love me and care for me.
Under their good care,I grew up happily.
I learned how to cherish things in my life.
My parents,my teachers,my classmates and my friends are always so supportive of me,
don’t live your life in regret!
I still remembered the scene at that time.We were having science lesson when the earthquake happened.
At first,it shook slightly,and I wasn’t afraid of it at all.
After the earthquake,the first thing I remembered is my home,the place that makes my heart warm.As you know,many people.
We should be grateful,because we survived this time.
From the earthquake,I know more about life.When the earthquake happened,I was afraid I might die.It is because,there are a lot of people who love me and care for me.
Under their good care,I grew up happily.
I learned how to cherish things in my life.
My parents,my teachers,my classmates and my friends are always so supportive of me,
don’t live your life in regret!