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Last Monday, (老师您好！我试着做一做今年高考英语作文题请您根据高考要求对我写的内容进行批改和给出得分此题满分20分，老师请一定给出中肯意见和分数谢谢！） This week, my father went out ,however, at that time, my mother got ill, so I have to take care of her! Unfortunatelly, my mother had a fever and she had to stay in bed all day !So I took temperature 4 times a day in order to know her illness well parents praised me and took her More over I also did her favourite dishes at the dinner time and fed her with the meal 3 times a day. Because of my good care, my mother got better and better and a week later, things got better, my father finally came back and my mother got well as well. My mother told my father that I took a good care of her .My parents praised me and they said I did a good job! They also said that there is no doubt that I am their good son.
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This week, my father went out ,however, at that time, my mother got ill, so I have to take care of her! Unfortunatelly, my mother had a fever and she had to stay in bed all day !So I took temperature 4 times a day in order to know her illness well
parents praised me and took her
More over I also did her favourite dishes at the dinner time and fed her with the meal 3 times a day. Because of my good care, my mother got better and better and a week later, things got better, my father finally came back and my mother got well as well. My mother told my father that I took a good care of her .My parents praised me and they said I did a good job! They also said that there is no doubt that I am their good son.
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This week, my father went out ,however, at that time, my mother got ill, so I have to take care of her! Unfortunately, my mother had a fever and she had to stay in bed all day !So I took temperature 4 times a day in order to know her illness well，More over I also did her favourite dishes at the dinner time and fed her with the food 3 times a day. Because of my good care, my mother got better and better and a week later, things got better, my father finally came back and my mother got well . My mother told my father that I took a good care of her .My parents praised me and they said I did a good job! They also said that there is no doubt that I am their good son.
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最终答案：略
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This week, my father went out ,however, at that time, my mother got ill, so I have to take care of her! Unfortunatelly, my mother had a fever and she had to stay in bed all day !So I took temperature 4 times a day in order to know her illness well
parents praised me and took her
More over I also did her favourite dishes at the dinner time and fed her with the meal 3 times a day. Because of my good care, my mother got better and better and a week later, things got better, my father finally came back and my mother got well as well. My mother told my father that I took a good care of her .My parents praised me and they said I did a good job! They also said that there is no doubt that I am their good son.
文章很好，红色部分稍加改动即可。
This week, my father went out ,however, at that time, my mother got ill, so I have to take care of her! Unfortunately, my mother had a fever and she had to stay in bed all day !So I took temperature 4 times a day in order to know her illness well，More over I also did her favourite dishes at the dinner time and fed her with the food 3 times a day. Because of my good care, my mother got better and better and a week later, things got better, my father finally came back and my mother got well . My mother told my father that I took a good care of her .My parents praised me and they said I did a good job! They also said that there is no doubt that I am their good son.
我是Frank,很高兴为你答题。如有疑问请添加讨论，我会尽快做回复。祝你学习进步，生活愉快！
最终答案：略