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求一篇高中短文改错!The party went on very good and we all had a good

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求一篇高中短文改错!
The party went on very good and we all had a good time .Nearly all the people came who were inviting .Jane could not come because she had been to Beijing .Tom was also away in country with his parents .Mary's friends brought their instruments and played beautiful music so that everyone could dance .Franco drink too much more and fell over when he was dancing with Ann,that made everyone laugh .Timtold us he'd go to abroad soon .And Steve met Jack and spent all the evening talking to them .All of us enjoyed ourselves .
The party went on very good and we all had a good time .第一个good 改为well
Nearly all the people came who were inviting .inviting改invited,此外觉得语序上有点怪,改成 Nearly all the people who were invited came.
Jane could not come because she had been to Beijing .been 改为gone
Tom was also away in country with his parents .in 后面加 the
Franco drink too much more and fell over when he was dancing with Ann,that made everyone laugh .drink 改为drank ,more去掉,that 改which
Timtold us he'd go to abroad soon .to 去掉
And Steve met Jack and spent all the evening talking to them .the 去掉