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英语作文修改:The Persons I look up to

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英语作文修改:The Persons I look up to
The Persons I look up to 
      My father is the man I respect most.Stern as he may be,he never fails to show his care and consideration. 

      Once I broke a neighbor's window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what had happened.

  I could only tell him the truth.Rather than scold me,he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor.I learned from this episode that not only does Dad take care of our health but he also teaches us how to be good citizens. 

       How lucky I am to have such a good father!
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1)stern估计是你查字典查来的吧,你想说你父亲比较严格,用strict就可以.stern不恰当不太有人用了
2)rather than scolding me,或者instead of scolding me
3)I learned from this experience 而不是episode