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求助英语改错题!Last weekend,I Have had an interview with professor

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求助英语改错题!
Last weekend,I Have had an interview with professor wang,a eye doctor,concerning the problem of short-sightedness in china.According to him,half of the school children in our country is short-sighted,ranked the first in the world.He also pointed out that the causes for the short-sightedness are such complicated that no medicine can cure them.He suggested that school children avoided overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.He particular reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related short-sightedness.这段短文有十个错误,
第一行:Have去掉、a改成an、concerning后边加with
第二行:最后一个the去掉
第三行:ranked改为ranking
第四行:for改为of、such改为so
第五行:avoided改为avoid
第六行:particular改为particularly、related后边加to
第七行:无