帮我看一下我的作文有没有问题,非常急,一个小时之内.
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帮我看一下我的作文有没有问题,非常急,一个小时之内.
Good afternoon everyone ,let me intorduce myself.My name is xxx.I am in class six grade six of xiyuan school .I am a lively girl.I have a lot of friends,they are very friendly to me.I like to ride a bike、play with my friend.I also like the language,because it is very interesting.Well,this is me!
Good afternoon everyone ,let me intorduce myself.My name is xxx.I am in class six grade six of xiyuan school .I am a lively girl.I have a lot of friends,they are very friendly to me.I like to ride a bike、play with my friend.I also like the language,because it is very interesting.Well,this is me!
I am in class six grade six of xiyuan school .(of改为in,你可以把school 改为 primary school 小学
I like to ride a bike、play with my friend.(不应该连一起你可以改为I enjoy riding a bike and I also like to play with my friend .)
I also like the language,because it is very interesting(你很喜欢语言?或者你就说我很喜欢外语:I like foreign language very much ,it is so interesting)
I like to ride a bike、play with my friend.(不应该连一起你可以改为I enjoy riding a bike and I also like to play with my friend .)
I also like the language,because it is very interesting(你很喜欢语言?或者你就说我很喜欢外语:I like foreign language very much ,it is so interesting)