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Dear Liu Jun,
How are you?I have studied in Detroit for almost one year .when the teachers and suudents are very friend with me.With ,I've
made a great progess in my studies.The climate isn't what I expect.I have gradually adapted me to it.Detroit,whose industry is famous ,belongs to the developed world,All kind of lights on at night,
Dear Liu Jun,
How are you?I have studied in Detroit for almost one year .when the teachers and suudents are very friend with me.With ,I've
made a great progess in my studies.The climate isn't what I expect.I have gradually adapted me to it.Detroit,whose industry is famous ,belongs to the developed world,All kind of lights on at night,
Dear Liu Jun,
How are you?(这句话没问题,但是就如楼上说的,改成How is it going或者how are you doing更好些)
I have studied in Detroit for almost one year.
The teachers and students are all very friendly to me.(friend改friendly; with改to)
I've made great progess in my studies.(去掉a; studies不用改)
The climate isn't what I had expected,but I have gradually adapted myself to it.(expect改成had expected; 合并句子; my改成myself)
Detroit,which is famous for its industries,is highly developed.(whose industry不能用,whose是用来描述人的,改为which is famous for its industries或者of which the industries are famous; belongs to the developed world虽然没有错,但是很怪,改成is highly/very developed或者is a developed city)
All kinds of lights glisten at night.(kind加s; 这个句子需要动词,加上glisten或者flash或者radiate来形容灯光; 也可以改为all kinds of lights are on at night.)
How are you?(这句话没问题,但是就如楼上说的,改成How is it going或者how are you doing更好些)
I have studied in Detroit for almost one year.
The teachers and students are all very friendly to me.(friend改friendly; with改to)
I've made great progess in my studies.(去掉a; studies不用改)
The climate isn't what I had expected,but I have gradually adapted myself to it.(expect改成had expected; 合并句子; my改成myself)
Detroit,which is famous for its industries,is highly developed.(whose industry不能用,whose是用来描述人的,改为which is famous for its industries或者of which the industries are famous; belongs to the developed world虽然没有错,但是很怪,改成is highly/very developed或者is a developed city)
All kinds of lights glisten at night.(kind加s; 这个句子需要动词,加上glisten或者flash或者radiate来形容灯光; 也可以改为all kinds of lights are on at night.)
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