作业帮大家帮我的英文文章挑下语法等方面的错误!
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大家帮我的英文文章挑下语法等方面的错误!
Dear sir(madam):
We express our desire to establish business relatations with your firm.I have contacted with Miss yang ying before.But she have resigned that i heard.She told me that contact with you from now on.I had sent the file to yang ying before.Our company can produce the first hose about the quotation (a).Pls check the attachment.You can contact with me if you have any questions.I will reply you as soon as possible.We wish our cooperation to be good start.
Please read the attachment about the quotation.Today,the Euro against the Chinese Yuan exchange rate is 1:10.30.The quotation is only for 7th sep.2007 and in Renminbi(Yuan)!
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Sorry,change subject,I hope it is not rude.Should i call you Mr.,Ms or Miss?
Best Regards!
Dear sir(madam):
We express our desire to establish business relatations with your firm.I have contacted with Miss yang ying before.But she have resigned that i heard.She told me that contact with you from now on.I had sent the file to yang ying before.Our company can produce the first hose about the quotation (a).Pls check the attachment.You can contact with me if you have any questions.I will reply you as soon as possible.We wish our cooperation to be good start.
Please read the attachment about the quotation.Today,the Euro against the Chinese Yuan exchange rate is 1:10.30.The quotation is only for 7th sep.2007 and in Renminbi(Yuan)!
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Sorry,change subject,I hope it is not rude.Should i call you Mr.,Ms or Miss?
Best Regards!
Dear Sir/Madam,
We express our desire to establish business relatationships with your firm now.
I once contacted Miss yang ying before,but she has resigned as I heard and she told me that you have been the new liason person from now on.
As the document I sent to yang ying before reads,our company can produce the first hose about the quotation (a).Pls check the attachment.Pls do not hesitate to contact me if you have any question.I will reply to you as soon as possible.
Hope we can build up a good cooperation relationships.
Please notice the attachment about the quotation.Today,the Euro against the Chinese Yuan exchange rate is 1:10.30.And the quotation is only for 7th sep.2007 and in Renminbi(Yuan)!
We are looking forward to your reply!
Best Regards!
Yours sincerely,
...
We express our desire to establish business relatationships with your firm now.
I once contacted Miss yang ying before,but she has resigned as I heard and she told me that you have been the new liason person from now on.
As the document I sent to yang ying before reads,our company can produce the first hose about the quotation (a).Pls check the attachment.Pls do not hesitate to contact me if you have any question.I will reply to you as soon as possible.
Hope we can build up a good cooperation relationships.
Please notice the attachment about the quotation.Today,the Euro against the Chinese Yuan exchange rate is 1:10.30.And the quotation is only for 7th sep.2007 and in Renminbi(Yuan)!
We are looking forward to your reply!
Best Regards!
Yours sincerely,
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