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下面的文章谁帮我改下错啊.
I have two foreign friengs,Kari and Vance,they are come from the USA.Now they are teaching in the unisity in Nanjing.Last year they paid a visit to our school.I have never met any foreigners before and wanted very much to know however I was getting on with my spoken English ,because I went over to talk with them.All of them were surprised that a school student could speak English and suggested to taking a photo together.Since then we become good friends and now write English letter to each other often.
I have two foreign friengs,Kari and Vance,they are come from the USA.Now they are teaching in the unisity in Nanjing.Last year they paid a visit to our school.I have never met any foreigners before and wanted very much to know however I was getting on with my spoken English ,because I went over to talk with them.All of them were surprised that a school student could speak English and suggested to taking a photo together.Since then we become good friends and now write English letter to each other often.
改正后：I have two foreign friends,Kari and Vance,they are from the USA.Now they are teaching in a university in Nanjing.Last year they paid a visit to my school.I had never met any foreigners before and wanted very much to know how I was getting on with my spoken English,so I went over to talk with them.Both of them were surprised that a school student could speak English and suggested taking a thoto together.Since then we became good friends and now we write English letter to each other often.