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作文修改 Last saturday,i booked .

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作文修改 Last saturday,i booked train tickets and hotel room for the anniversary of my grandparents to Beidaihe.And i also checked the weather ,which they most concerned about.Seeing their excitement,i felf happy either. In the afternoon,i went to the train station to get tickets on my own.I was very glad that things went on smoothly. On the sunday morning ,i got up very early to pack the package for them.In order to get things fully prepared,i had made a list and checked cautiously. At the evening,i sent them to the train stop.We said goodbye then the train was about to leave.At the same time, i saw the smile on their face.It s the symbol of happiness.I felf satisfied for what i had done and wished them an unforgettable journy. 学生困惑:请评分(20满分),并修改,
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解题思路: 总体来说 把握单词和句型的能力很好 句子没有什么大错 但要注意细节问题 17分左右
解题过程:
1 I booked two train tickets to Bedaihe and a hotel room on line for the anniverasay of my grandparents 是在网上订的票 2 either-- too checked it
3 In the evening 4 was to leave 5 It was the symbol 6 I felt 7 I felt satisfied with 8 journey