作业帮下面的英语句子我写的对吗?如果不正确烦请指正,
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下面的英语句子我写的对吗?如果不正确烦请指正,
中文内容：“张先生已经把签好字的文件给我了,我将马上快递给您,请告知您的详细地址,接收人信息,关于费用：张先生会通过汇丰银行转账给您,他汇款后我立刻通知您.”
Mr Zhang has sent Signs the document to me already.I will now be sent to you,Please tell me your exact address,Recipient information.cost：Mr Zhang will paid by bank transfer,He remittance inform you immediately
中文内容：“张先生已经把签好字的文件给我了,我将马上快递给您,请告知您的详细地址,接收人信息,关于费用：张先生会通过汇丰银行转账给您,他汇款后我立刻通知您.”
Mr Zhang has sent Signs the document to me already.I will now be sent to you,Please tell me your exact address,Recipient information.cost：Mr Zhang will paid by bank transfer,He remittance inform you immediately
有些问题,改为：
Mr.Zhang has sent me the signed document and I will courier to you by express soon.Please kindly let me know your address and consignee contact information.As for the expenses,Mr.Zhang will transfer the money to you through HSBC.I will notify you as soon as he remits the payment.
Mr.Zhang has sent me the signed document and I will courier to you by express soon.Please kindly let me know your address and consignee contact information.As for the expenses,Mr.Zhang will transfer the money to you through HSBC.I will notify you as soon as he remits the payment.