作业帮这个文章的范文 和 写作的注意事项
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假如你是李华，你的英国笔友JIM来信告诉你说他今年暑假要来你的家乡山东济南旅游一周。请根据下列要点给JIM写封信，回信必须包括以下要点 1、欢迎他来中国旅游 2、暑假他可以住在你的家里，便于更方便地了解中国文化 3、你将带他在济南爬山，看泉，吃各种风味小吃，体验中国传统文化4、请他告诉你他到达的具体时间和航班号，便于你和父母去机场迎接 这是一篇写回信的，写信的注意事项，怎样在写信中做到面面俱到
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你好，答疑如下
Dear Jim，
Glad to receive your letter.Welcome to Jinan for holiday this summer.I would like to show you my plan.
My house is big enough to live in，so that I can introduce you Chinese culture any moment. There are numbers of attractions here such as the Baotu Spring. Mountains-climbing ,I think will be our fun. Local snacks are worth tasting，too. After all ，the traditional Chinese culture is experenced in them. Please tell me your arrival time and flight in advance，I will meet you at the airport.
looking forward to your tour of Jinan.
Yours，
Lihua
写信事项
1.可读性.对象是大学程度的话,用高中的英文就行,不要以为人人都是语言大师.多用短句(15-20字吧), 技术性的字,就更加要简单易明.
2.注意段落的开头.一般来说,重要或强调的事情都放在信件或段落的开头,而句子就放在最尾. 例如: 1.Because he was unable to attend the meeting personally, he forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape. 2.He forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape because he was unable to attend the meeting personally. 两者强调的事情就有分别了.
3.轻重有分. 同等重要的用and来连接,较轻放在次要的句子里.
4.意思转接词要留神. 例如: but (相反), therefore (结论), also (增添), for example (阐明). 分不清furthermore和moreover就不要用啦.
5.句子开头不要含糊不清的主词. 例子: These decisions have been a big disappointment to the committee members. They have delayed further action. They是指什么呀????开头少用this, that, it, they, 或 which.
6.修饰词的位置要小心,例如: He could only reimburse the cost after July 15. 应为 He could reimburse the cost only after July 15.
7.用语要肯定准确.切忌含糊. 例如:The figures show a significant increase.” 怎样significant呀,大哥? 改为: The figures show an increase of 19%.
8.立场观点一致. 少用被动语. 例如: Partial data should be submitted by April. 改为: You should submit partial data by April.就很好了.
愿你满意，异议来信。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下
Dear Jim，
Glad to receive your letter.Welcome to Jinan for holiday this summer.I would like to show you my plan.
My house is big enough to live in，so that I can introduce you Chinese culture any moment. There are numbers of attractions here such as the Baotu Spring. Mountains-climbing ,I think will be our fun. Local snacks are worth tasting，too. After all ，the traditional Chinese culture is experenced in them. Please tell me your arrival time and flight in advance，I will meet you at the airport.
looking forward to your tour of Jinan.
Yours，
Lihua
写信事项
1.可读性.对象是大学程度的话,用高中的英文就行,不要以为人人都是语言大师.多用短句(15-20字吧), 技术性的字,就更加要简单易明.
2.注意段落的开头.一般来说,重要或强调的事情都放在信件或段落的开头,而句子就放在最尾. 例如: 1.Because he was unable to attend the meeting personally, he forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape. 2.He forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape because he was unable to attend the meeting personally. 两者强调的事情就有分别了.
3.轻重有分. 同等重要的用and来连接,较轻放在次要的句子里.
4.意思转接词要留神. 例如: but (相反), therefore (结论), also (增添), for example (阐明). 分不清furthermore和moreover就不要用啦.
5.句子开头不要含糊不清的主词. 例子: These decisions have been a big disappointment to the committee members. They have delayed further action. They是指什么呀????开头少用this, that, it, they, 或 which.
6.修饰词的位置要小心,例如: He could only reimburse the cost after July 15. 应为 He could reimburse the cost only after July 15.
7.用语要肯定准确.切忌含糊. 例如:The figures show a significant increase.” 怎样significant呀,大哥? 改为: The figures show an increase of 19%.
8.立场观点一致. 少用被动语. 例如: Partial data should be submitted by April. 改为: You should submit partial data by April.就很好了.
愿你满意，异议来信。
最终答案：略