作业帮小明写了一篇英语作文,里面有几处错误,请你纠正.
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小明写了一篇英语作文,里面有几处错误,请你纠正.
We had an international food festival to make some friends.We had the festival last Friday,from 3pm to 6 pm.We had it in the Sunshine Park.At the international food festival,I sold many fast food.Ror example,the apple pies,hamburgers,fried chips and so on.Although we all know that the fast food is unhealthy,many young people like it.
We had an international food festival to make some friends.We had the festival last Friday,from 3pm to 6 pm.We had it in the Sunshine Park.At the international food festival,I sold many fast food.Ror example,the apple pies,hamburgers,fried chips and so on.Although we all know that the fast food is unhealthy,many young people like it.
many---much
Ror---For
the fast food----fast food
Although we all know that the fast food is unhealthy,many young people like it.（人称不一致）
--- Although many young people all know that the fast food is unhealthy,they like it.
Ror---For
the fast food----fast food
Although we all know that the fast food is unhealthy,many young people like it.（人称不一致）
--- Although many young people all know that the fast food is unhealthy,they like it.
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