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短文改错(共10处错,每处1分,满分10分)

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短文改错(共10处错,每处1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I am a senior 3 student. Recently I have made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls. The result of the survey is as the follows: That the boys like to do most is to become businessmen while the girls favorite work is to be teachers. Only few boys want to do this job. It is interested that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyers, more boys expect to have this job. Therefore, there are still students are not clear about their future. In a word, they all express they would work hard at their lessons for the College Entrance Examination. As long as they do this badly, they will realize their great dreams. 

1.去掉as后的the ;  2.That 改为What;  3.favourite前的girls改为girls’;
4. few 前加a; 5.interested 改为interesting; 6. equal 前的are改为is; 7.Therefore改为However;  8.students后加who;  9.would 改为will.
10. badly改为well.