英语翻译I am in China today.Reviewed situation with Edmond and I

英语翻译
I am in China today.Reviewed situation with Edmond and I am very sorry to advise you that Edmond did screw up quite a bit of the works.He asked me to relay his apology to you all at Pro-Line.
In view of these mistakes,he would need to re-layout the molds.I understand we should get products to ship out no later than Nov so that you can make use of the Christmas sales.Now tentatively this is what we are going to do.On one hand we’ll shape up the parts / molds that don’t need substantial change and on the other hand take away all those deleted parts and re-fit them into new mold bases,plus making all other changes per what we specified.We scheduled to have all these done within the week of Sept 3 and we’ll assemble and send you 1st EP on Sept 8.Let’s say if you can provide us comments on/before Sept 13,we’ll provide you FEP by end Sept.Say if you can approve FEP before Oct 6,we would target to ship one container by mid Nov.You’ll notice that all these are done under optimum conditions.Let’s say if we add 2 weeks cushions,we would still be able to ship you one container by end Nov.This is the worst case.
Pls let me know if this makes sense to you and if you have better suggestion.Thanks

今天我在中国.回顾Edmond的遭遇,我很抱歉,但需要告诉您的是Emond在工作上已经有想相当大的起色.他拜托我向您说声对不起关于pro-line之事.考虑到那些失误,他将会重新设计那些模型.我认为我们应该在11月份之前将那些产...