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一篇要上交的英语作文
Insomnia
If you always has a Suffer from insomnia,I’ll give you some advise.
First,you needn’t worry too much about insomnia,you should relax.Try to find the reason and tell yourself:it’s not difficult to sleep,I’ll asleep quickly.
Second,if you want to have a good seep,don’t forget to drink a cup of hot milk before you sleep.Don’t drink coffee or tea,they’ll make bad effect.And how about going for a walk and then having bath?
Third one also the most important one:You should train a good sleep habit.Rise early and sleep early will help a lot.
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Insomnia
If you always suffers from insomnia,I can give you some advise.
First,you needn’t worry too much about insomnia,you should relax.Try to find the reason and tell yourself:it’s not difficult to sleep,I’ll fall asleep quickly.
Second,if you want to have a good sleep,don’t forget to drink a cup of hot milk before you sleep.Don’t drink coffee or tea,
they’ll make a bad effect.And what about going for a walk and then having a bath?
Third one also is the most important one:You should develop a good sleep habit.getting up early and sleeping early will help a lot.
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