作业帮修改作文,不只是修改语法错误
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修改作文,不只是修改语法错误
My name is Xiaoyue Liu.I graduated from N Junior High school .I miss that place very much.However,I am looking forward more to the 3 wonderful years that we are going to spend at W High School.In my opinion,I’m a very lucky girl,for the good friends and my dear relatives keep me as company all the time.When I meet with troubles ,they will give me hands and always on my side.Because of them,I become more extroverted.I have many hobbies.I love playing the flute and listening to music.I like painting and reading books on psycholigy.I want to be a painter when I grow up.I want to use my brush to spread happiness to many more people.
My name is Xiaoyue Liu.I graduated from N Junior High school .I miss that place very much.However,I am looking forward more to the 3 wonderful years that we are going to spend at W High School.In my opinion,I’m a very lucky girl,for the good friends and my dear relatives keep me as company all the time.When I meet with troubles ,they will give me hands and always on my side.Because of them,I become more extroverted.I have many hobbies.I love playing the flute and listening to music.I like painting and reading books on psycholigy.I want to be a painter when I grow up.I want to use my brush to spread happiness to many more people.
帮你改了下,因为事实不了解,所以内容上还是只能在你的基础上改,你自己对照一下,我肯定不会写一些“chinglish”的句子的,绝对地道的,相信您识货!
My name is Xiaoyue Liu. I graduated from N Junior High School. Though I miss that place very much, I am even more excited about the 3 years ahead of me. I can’t help to think how wonderful it is going to be, to have my new start at W High School.
In my opinion, I’m a very lucky girl. For starters,(这里是To begin with的意思,如果你觉得不适合高一的学生,就改个普通的,看你喜好,只是老外经常这么用：)) My good friends and dear relatives always keep me company. And it’s not just that! When I meet with troubles, they will always be on my side and give me help. They also encourage me to be more open, more social – to be more extroverted perhaps. (改成这样是为了逻辑上更严谨,因为前文看不出他们把你变得外向了) That’s why I have so many hobbies: I love playing the flute and listening to music. I also like painting and reading books on psychology. I want to be a painter when I grow up. I want to use my brush to disseminate (disseminate更地道,但是还是看你喜好,spread也可以) happiness to many other people.
My name is Xiaoyue Liu. I graduated from N Junior High School. Though I miss that place very much, I am even more excited about the 3 years ahead of me. I can’t help to think how wonderful it is going to be, to have my new start at W High School.
In my opinion, I’m a very lucky girl. For starters,(这里是To begin with的意思,如果你觉得不适合高一的学生,就改个普通的,看你喜好,只是老外经常这么用：)) My good friends and dear relatives always keep me company. And it’s not just that! When I meet with troubles, they will always be on my side and give me help. They also encourage me to be more open, more social – to be more extroverted perhaps. (改成这样是为了逻辑上更严谨,因为前文看不出他们把你变得外向了) That’s why I have so many hobbies: I love playing the flute and listening to music. I also like painting and reading books on psychology. I want to be a painter when I grow up. I want to use my brush to disseminate (disseminate更地道,但是还是看你喜好,spread也可以) happiness to many other people.